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Friday, April 27, 2007

trying something new


I just randomly felt like doing something in color, just putting it down and seeing what came of it. This is the result. I like somethings about it but I really feel like it could be improved in a lot of ways... color and composition wise. Perhaps a little too saturated? I don't know, color is a skill I'm trying to improve. Helpful hints would be great! Cheers

3 comments:

elephantmarchblog said...

The colors are nice; the really saturated red of the sky works because it is backed against the more muted red of everything else. I think it's better to opt for more flat brush stroke and colors then that overly soft, airbrushy look.

Also, A lot of things are a bit too paralell: The Tallest tree is the foreground is about the same height as the mountain peak, and a lot of other things are a bit too even as well. Try really changing up the height and width of everything to make it less uniform

Rick Capistrano said...

wow, Will...ur definitely not shy when it comes to criticism.

I think it looks like the mountain OF DEATH...

Scoobygang said...

looks really great.